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I’m gonna give it a 5 star right now b/c I’m a huge Pokémon fan and so far I think this is the best Pokémon fan-fic on this site. Quick question though is going to go to other regions before or after he beats the elite four b/c I think that they would be around the same “levels” for their Pokémon. Oh yeah almost forgot MMMmmmMMMmOOoooOOOoorRRRrrRrEEEeEeEe
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The title and description caught my attention along with the OC being Noah Oak who is the older brother of Gary Oak not to mention of course the starter pokemon Bagon that he got when it had hatched from the egg got me quite intrigued and interested as well since the other trainers are Red and Leaf not to mention the strategy he used against Brock as well how he beat Misty definitely got me more into this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book would love to read more as well find out what will happen next especially when the OC has now met Michael the hero of the Orre Region
Story wise it's alright and we'll written. Some negatives are that despite it being in kanto with a pallet Town resident, the MC starts with a gen 5 or 6 pokemon... Later on he finds yet another of these newer gens. For me the newer gens are a big turn off. One that is only balanced out by his side adventures and interaction with others.. The MC is a likable guy. That said, the rating I gave isn't high because it seems to be dropped making me rate a star leas than the avarage of 3 that I usually give. I would have liked to see more going on in the story tough.
For the moment, it is a good pokemon story. The story is progressing at a good pace. Nethertheless, the character design and the world background is not enough developped for the moment (it's only the beginning but the author seriously need to give info of his world if he wants the reader to be immersed in his story).