Alan_demonic
J'aime beaucoup le deroulement de l'histoire. On voit que MC devra s'entrainer et se battre pour monter au sommet. Pas de capacités comme tp, inventaire, ou d'autres cheat. Il a juste une capacité de voir les couleurs de talent, c'est très bien. J'aime bien la romance Cynthia MC, une seule relation sans harem c'est très bien. Il y a beaucoup trop de fanfictions pokémons harem avec toutes les filles de la saga, alors que Cynthia MC oui merci ! Continuez comme ça
well, well, well... what to say about this, to begin with the irregular MC, without memories, his personality development is quite unusual, his feelings change according to the author's convention, but that's normal in fics so nothing to comment on doing about it, take advantage of the time in training, and is not pessimistic. 4 stars. Let's move on to the development of the story, the pokemon world "invented" by the author, I received a lot of xiansi vibes from how it is made, but it is only based on the legendary pokemon trainer novels, polemon tactics, etc. or so I want to believe, blood ties seem to me more of a disadvantage in the distant future, the power of them is not well thought out, as it seems that all children can very easily have a pokemon of the quality of cynthia's garchomp, harem, the levels are also poorly thought out at the moment, but the story is just beginning so it can be developed later, let's not forget about the children who act as young masters of a wuxia novel, or how conveniently the MC is done friends or enemies of the main characters here and there. hmmm... between 2 and 3 stars at the moment, maybe it will go up in the future. let's end the world background, bad xiansi, bad harem, not so generic MC, generic character development, generic convenience, good world regulation, generic wishes with karma points to a ROB, very bad CLANS in pokemon. in general it would be a solid 2
Quite possibly one of the best pokemon fanfics I have ever read. The battles are well though out, the level progression and mastery system in place is also phenomenal. Additionally the plot of the story is beyond amazing so far. The Author is also highly receptive to constructive criticisms so kudos to that. Overall a must read if you are a Pokemon fan. Keep up the good work author-nim.
I absolutely recomend this novel, great pokemon AU fanfic, the battles specially are very dynamic all character are great and the pokemon are people instead of of just dolls that can just say their names once in a while. The only stain in the fanfic is the prologue, which is pointless and infuriating, a HUGE turn off for anyone reading and really the only way to make it worse is if the author personally came to your house to kick you in the balls. That said, its just a turn off, the rest of the work is top tier and totally worth reading.