its good what else can i tell you. There's no need for super long essays just to ultimately say its good.

i am by no means an expert in this but i have read many, and i mean many fanfics in this app and outside of it, and this fic feels pretty average, not terrible but also not great. The story is fast paced that i think i will forget what happened in just a day, like there's not even like a training stuff just some time skip then bam something evolved, there's also stuff with how their pokemon get caught it feels kinda force, so yeah fast paced. The dialogue also feels robotic sometimes dunno how to explain this it just feels like it to me. So all in all read it if you're just passing time and have nothing better to do . there may have some like fast paced tags in it and people may like counter well achktually me but oh well you win some you lose some.

mebe this for guild name

sry internet corrupted me and this is what i imagine when i see swordfight

then i will be here reading your works and see where this journey will go :)

thanks for the chapter! got a quick question will drifter get like a special weapon/class to use like kirito using two swords or will he stick to using spears?

stop laughing*

human costumes? maybe it should be human customs

im having fun reading this fic, sure there are some cliches here and there but i would very much prefer this than a fic where it inserts sex scenes left right and center when its not clearly needed and is only there for views, so keep up the goodwork author-san! ps. is the fmc yuna as someone who has not been in a relationship i dunno anything about love HAHAHHA

Glad to see that this is getting some love, to a 3.6 star rating to a 4.0 rating but still not enough that's why i am also giving my part. now the reason why i like this fic is simple, its not you're "get reincarnated get op in 10 chapters fic" its a slow burner where you get to enjoy the mc and his trials and tribulations to becoming a powerhouse. i would have loved if the author post more but eh we all have our circumstances, keep up the goodwork author-san! and ps, i would rather take this than some trash fic with wish fulfilments and inserting sex scenes left right and center when its not clearly needed.

have been using webnovel for more than a year and as time pass by i grow more tired with the kind of novels are being posted here, its either op mc or edgy mc or a mc who thinks with his dick or an author milking his viewers with fanservices and puts sex scenes in every chapter where it clearly is not needed, but this novel isn't doing it, it gives you a different take on the mha verse, and at the same time doesn't, it also hits u with the feels. so with thousands of novels being published everyday and thousands more being created everyday in this app i could 💯 say that i only actively read less than 5 novels here and this one is one of them. so do your best author-san!

in one of the extras chapter in oshi no ko

how about doing "snap" than doing this.

i will wait for your return author-san

i don't know if they fixed it but i tried using webnovel on chrome with my phone and it works maybe its fixed on the pc?