Reviews of Peacefully Retiring in this Wonderful World (Konosuba - FGO)
Peacefully Retiring in this Wonderful World (Konosuba - FGO)
TheEternalWanderer
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I know this ain’t your novel but I still like to say this story is off putting. Especially this sentient sword arc. I liked the fact that the character personalities are on point but that sentient sword is just too much. That whole “training” arc was bad. Darkness masochistic personality was main point in that arc which I don’t like that much. I guess this is just me. Maybe there are some people out there who might like it but it just ain’t for me.
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The author will let you down. The story will make you retarded. The mc is cool but retarded for not finishing the job and being a pussy. In conclusion from a fellow reader who's read way worse story's but didn't let me down or make me feel retarded. THIS SHIT WILL MAKE YOU A RETARD!!! P.S read at own disclosure,if you want to become retarded also sorry authentic but the fans you ****'ed and kept jerking without giving us release,have spoken.....
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Given the fact that i enjoyed the authors Star Wars story i thought id enjoy this, how wrong i was. the author seems to follow the rules of random=funny and while i could bare with it they also like to use the trope of ‘smart character is stupid for plot convience’ and it take the already barely tolerable issues and proceeds to make it unreadable
The characters from Konosuba are written to a tee, the chapters have good structure, and although there are a ton of typos is perfectly readable, etc etc, ad nauseam. However, the story development is a joke, MC is a eunuch just like any other generic Japanese MC, even Kazuma had his moments with the girls, writing a story about a harem party without any interaction is the recipe for a blue-balls story I read about 33 chapters and now I'm done with it, honestly is a shame I really like the premise and the comedy.