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you have a good story line but what I do suggest you do is start start your synopsis with a dialogue between the seventeen year old boy and his bully/bullies. And give your viewers a little bit more description about the kid, but overall your story is amazing, keep up the good work author because it doesn't stop here for you[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This is my first time giving 5* to a review. I have never gone beyond 4.8 before [Except for my own Novels. LOL ;) ] Now, let us get going- Writing Quality: Amazing! Conversation Style. Use of Japanese terms. A bit of humor. Just perfect. Stability of Updates: Consistent. 1 Chapter a day. Story Development: Super Good. Just love the natural flow of the story. Character Design: A school kid being bullied and parents who help. Unlike other anime and manga where the kids hide the bullying or the parents are too busy to care or know. This novel takes the logical approach. World Background: The setting is a world which is REAL. Which is logical. With which we can connect to.
This book is without doubt a gem. I think readers at all age levels can relate and learn from Han's experience. Han starts with a hopeless situation. But it's heartwarming to be reminded that there's still people who still care about Han. I love the central idea of the story: don't give up. Push through. Even if it's hard, things will get better. Great job! Keep it up!
Loving this work so far. Enjoying the ongoing references to Dragon Ball z, which was one of my favorite TV shows growing up. This story starts with a bang as the protagonist is saved from taking his own life and moves at a great pace as he takes up martial arts training. And even though he comes off as kind of hopeless in the beginning, one can't help but cheer on the protagonist. Also of note, the fight scenes in this are on point.