you have a good story line but what I do suggest you do is start start your synopsis with a dialogue between the seventeen year old boy and his bully/bullies. And give your viewers a little bit more description about the kid, but overall your story is amazing, keep up the good work author because it doesn't stop here for you[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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