Reviews of Pan's Games in the multiverse

Its hilarious, the grammer is good, and it will have a good update schedule. Plus, its original and ive never seen something like this (Peter Pan) personally. Though there is only two chapters and it might be too early to judge, I wanted first review rights.

An idea I have never even seen before, check Multiverse travel and starter wprld is very rare to see as the first, check Likeable Mc, check Humor, check Basically all the things I like, this is a harem though so if you don't like harem then there's that...