babyseven
Ouu you were sold? I wouldn't mind being sold...only if he's cute tho....jk jk👀. But seriously tho after this first chapter I wanted to read more and more, and I am glad that you fed me what I wanted. Being sold to the Mafia is so sexy. That is on the pages of course. We can't have that in real life now can we?👀👀
The plot holds potential and the characters are interesting in their own way. I kinda get lost with the flow of the story and by the abrupt changes of POV in the middle but it nonetheless, I recommend it to people into mafia stories like me! There were some minor wording errors but it could easily be edited😊 Keep writing author!