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Reviews of One Piece: The Third Apprentice

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One Piece: The Third Apprentice

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Ivan_Smirnov
Ivan_SmirnovLv1Ivan_Smirnov

Man stop creating so many fics and dont update them .............................................................................................................................

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Ainz_Sama_1234
Ainz_Sama_1234Lv4Ainz_Sama_1234

I want to read this but you drop mostly all of your novels I can't seem to trust you to read this so i will wait till the novel is in its laye stage till then see you

TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13TreacherousVoid

Honestly this is currently a waste of time. Nothing is happening and what IS happening isnt even about the MC. Its about Rogers crew and all of it so far has been un-important. Every event that takes place is “we did this” and “we did that” and not “I did this” we hardly know the MC because of this. Honestly i care more about shanks than the MC rn because of this lol No point reading this rn, 18/24 chapters (as far as ive read) are just prologue basically. Dont know when the author intends to start the actual story (when MC starts his crew)

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

WalterHeisenberg
WalterHeisenbergLv4WalterHeisenberg

You should read One Piece: Legend of Johnny Silverhand if you haven’t read it yet, cuz laffite is the navigator for Johnny’s crew and he got the same devil fruit with multiple attacks you can get from.

Daoistb3CO7C
Daoistb3CO7CLv2Daoistb3CO7C

Reveal spoiler

Quibby
QuibbyLv12Quibby

Fun story but this author is incredibly fickle and will either drop a story or abandon it for half a year, release 2 chapters and disappear again. No need to support an author that doesn't care about the readers.

The_Crimson_Writer
The_Crimson_WriterLv4The_Crimson_Writer

Really enjoyed the first few chapters, love the idea of The MC joining Rogars crew. I also like the MC so far, plus there’s no system or Overpowered Wishes. So the MC will have to do some good ol’ fashion hard work

Sparsh_Kumar_1064
Sparsh_Kumar_1064Lv4Sparsh_Kumar_1064

please don't stop uploading..,.....................

Stuck_D_Mouse
Stuck_D_MouseLv13Stuck_D_Mouse

love the story, but I'm waiting power stones on a story you won't take the time to finish. please prove me wrong.

Sparsh_Kumar_1064
Sparsh_Kumar_1064Lv4Sparsh_Kumar_1064

one of the best beginnings i have seen in a fanfiction. I just hope the author will write it to completion unlike his other books. I have read most of them and I think I like this one the best. So I hope he will increase the release frequency. Thank you for the story Author-san.

Malikim
MalikimLv4Malikim

CRAZY UPDATE!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Malikim
MalikimLv4Malikim

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

GaUm_
GaUm_Lv2GaUm_

I expect a lot from this fanfic, don't let it fall. .................................................................. ..................................................................

Kazvx
KazvxLv1Kazvx

Put more Chapter

Sudeep_Uppara
Sudeep_UpparaLv4Sudeep_Uppara

good starting ✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌

Jonathan_Pardo_4936
Jonathan_Pardo_4936Lv1Jonathan_Pardo_4936

Super duper legal mesmo continua a si👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

ravhage
ravhageLv4ravhage

love the story so far