Reviews of One Piece: The Elementalist
One Piece: The Elementalist
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why the **** is he under Luffy. he asks God to be strong but be a fucking loser with Luffy. **** this ****. this fanfic we don't care about fucking Luffy man. we care about the mc being a king and not dog for Luffy and maybe after he becomes the king he can go back to his family. why is every one piece fanfic is about the mc being luffy dog. man **** this.
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The story was going great, and I hope that it will eventually continue. Unfortunately, there has been no update for a few weeks, and it looks as though this novel will be dropped soon if it has not already. Read the last two chapters for more information. I truly hope the writer comes back and continues, because this story has great potential. The MC is an OP insert with a system who actually chosses to work hard for his abilities. Freaking great. The only problem is that the story has not had any chance to develop as there are only 8 actual chapters. There is simply not enough content to rate more than 3 stars. And as it has been a few weeks since the last update, I gave the stability of updates 1 star. Again, I hope that the author comea back and writes more. If that time comes, I will make another review.
Just a really great One Piece fanfic, definitely something that can be recommended Just a really great One Piece fanfic, definitely something that can be recommended Just a really great One Piece fanfic, definitely something that can be recommended Just a really great One Piece fanfic, definitely something that can be recommended
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