KingBing96
I enjoy to read fantasy because those are the stories that catch my fancy more than other genres. Reading is a good way to explore the worlds created by others.
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Maybe Susan Storm cause I don’t see another love interest having already being introduced. Definitely don’t think he’ll go after Sage considering he thinks of her like family.
Eh doesn’t really matter pushing the timeline a bit in either directions as long as it follows the events that pop up
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Honestly I would’ve thought that through the group chat system he could’ve made that Titans eye his own by now. Anakin has honestly always acted like a child throwing a tantrum. I hope that through your story his character has a chance to grow past that. I’m on the fence whether Anakin is really worth the trouble though but Shepard is kind in the same boat honestly. 🤷♂️ thanks for the chapter though the story is interesting.
Dang I don’t think it was that bad it wasn’t really that fast paced you skipped over things that didn’t really need to be covered. Just explain that he did. Even now with the last chapter he got the metal bending down quick probably cause he really talented. Plus he already knew it was possible from seeing the avatar series. Heck took still beats him in talent cause she got that stuff down pretty quickly.
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