Reviews of One Piece: Seaside System

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Well, I like jordinio fics, so this one is most likely going to be good. Too bad though that his update rates on his stories are slower than the internet explorer and he abandons many of them like my father did it to me... still going to give it a five star rating!

Arrg. Matey, yeh be ma rival. But dis time, aye lad, am gonnae do you in review box!

Can You Please Stop Dropping!! The Pokemon And Other Good FanFic Has Too Many Potential I Really Love Your Stories So Pls Stop Freaking Dropping It. I Wish You Wont Drop This Too Because I Also Really Like This Story ill Give You My Every Day Power Stone Just Stop Freaking Dropping!!!.

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One piece? OK. harem?! okay!! the author is one of my favorites?! let's go! qdjjdkdkdkekeksfsjegsftxbehwtstshvafwtwjeiwjshehueixkdjshjeenejzhxynetsyzollvxxvgkddjjd

Enjoying the story so far, but I wanted to ask, how long are you gonna continue to add new fics? I heard that Webnovel is beginning to have a limit on the amount of fics you can have, are you gonna continue to add them on a different account or? Just curious

dont drop this like you do with all your other amazing pieces of art it hurts to get invested in stuff and just have it taken from you . . . .

pls write as much as you can this is amazing.

Quite unconventional, I like it. I also want to know if the work will be connected to the multiverse or if this is a one-time event. (If he ended up in the world of One Piece, does that mean there are others?)

so I've read a few of jordino fics even he has never really COMPLETED ANY, he still is a good writer so for my review here we go so.. - writing quality so far has been good with basically zero grammatical errors and probably one or two spelling mistakes of there is ANY and the story so far is really understandable. -story development have been amazing with our mc so far being one that i kind like and though his power hasn't really been revealed yet since I'm not counting that Walmart gamer system as a golden finger anyways i like how the mc hasn't just been handed powers like candy just because and instead realistically looked at all the options and realized that even with foreknowledge of the plot it won't be easy to just grab powerful fruits or learn the best techniques's but has to work to earn his place in this universe and I really like that. -Character design is good since not many people have been introduced due to not having enough chapters yet but the few introduced are good enough. -updating stability is where jordino an I are REALLY GOING TO HAVE PROBLEMS -world background well it's one piece an already pre-existing universe so not much to really build but the author really understands the in universe law so overall it's a pretty good read and you should give it a try though if the author does eff up I'll let you guys know and I'll drop a review peace out

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Great story, good mc, I like the stories of this author. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Good Nice potential Enjoyable ...................................................................................................................................................

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Great story, good mc, and good powers. I read some of your other stories. ......................................................................................................................................................

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