In the end, only Tsunade remained. heh

You changed the picture of the work so suddenly that I even lost it for a moment

finally

Oh, I forgot what kind of core he had again?)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))....pls

Chapter 7 to 10 is another work, man. wtf. The dxd part was not bad at first glance, I am waiting for your continuation. [img=пощечина][img=пощечина][img=пощечина]

Finally, I realized what bothers me about this story. His words, dialogues, all this is strange to me, I don’t know how to explain it correctly, but his statements seem to be too correct, too idealistic. These phrases seem to have been torn out of some isekai story, where the hero was at first a simpleton with a pure heart, and then he is abruptly betrayed and he becomes strong, gloomy, smart, etc. But here... it was as if Midoriya had never fallen from the roof and his hopes and dreams had never been crushed by his idol. I understand that, roughly speaking, he is a completely different Midoriya, a different personality, but apart from his changed attitude towards his mother (which is actually excellent, but in my opinion, again there is too much dialogue, like: {Inko - Izuku, I prepared you have a bento! Midoriya - Oh my god...Mom, knowing that this is your bento, I understand that you put your soul, love, friendship, happiness and the like into it. It means everything to me.} I'M NOT SAYING THAT THIS IS BAD. I say that there is a lot of this strange dialogue in my opinion again.) and the newfound confidence that stems from his different life and system. These sad, I would even say terrifying, events had almost no effect on his attitude towards the world around him.

What is it, man?

Quite unconventional, I like it. I also want to know if the work will be connected to the multiverse or if this is a one-time event. (If he ended up in the world of One Piece, does that mean there are others?)

It would be better for him to have items that can do a rollback on his health. Something like Jashin’s curse or Natural energy (a concept, much was not revealed in Naruto and there were different types of energy besides the main ones as far as I remember). And later let Naruto make/come up with a way to quickly regenerate himself. And reviving directly from the System seems unnecessary; Naruto already has many possibilities.

This...This...This is Danzo-chan... he-he-he

Ideal plot. He warped time, ended up in the time of Avatar Aang, started dating Ursa. Ozai doesn’t understand anything and everyone is happy. (Except Azula, sad)

Anabeth was there, Luke stayed at the camp

long?)

I don't know how you would use a piece of Raava, but in one fanfiction about Zuko, he learned the sub-elements of firebending by copying the styles of Other Nations. Like Lightning, fire, ash control or something like that, and lavabending. You can make it so that he first tries to learn the sub-element, and only then the full-fledged one. Or something similar.

good

I JUST READ DANZO-SAMA AND SO FALLED OUT OF REALITY