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The one above all

A regular city bus was crossing a bridge, when suddenly two men jump out of the bus and are thrown away from the bridge. When they are about to reach the water, a massive explosion occurs and both are blown to smithereens.

Breaking news: Today at 7:45 pm a bus was tried to be hijacked by terrorist. The terrorist is suspected to be a member of al-Qaeda terrorist group. The terrorist had boarded the bus with c4 in his bag and had timed it to be exploded on the 7:45 pm. The total numbers of people in the bus were 32 including the terrorist, bus driver and conductor. The people were saved on the heroic sacrifice of a young man who had came from India for some business. He heroically jumped out of the bus while dragging the terrorist and his bag full of explosives with him. They both were thrown directly out of the bridge to directly into the lake below. The explosion went off immediately after it. The brave soul gave his life to save the people on board, and shall be remembered by us all. The government of America and India has announced a day off in his memory, and some monetary compensation for his parents to leave a proud and comfortable life.

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"Oh there are two people who died at the same time. Hmm let me see... Ok so the one on the left is the one who has no permission and the one on the right can enter the cycle of rebirth. Ok lets get rid of this bastard soul...", a muscular man was sitting near a huge black and white door muttered two himself as two light orbs floated towards the door.

The man reached out his left hand in the general direction of the soul on the left and a orb of flame was shot out from his hand and the left orb he called as bastard soul was covered in flames entirely. With another snap from his finger the burning soul dissipated from there sight leaving only a black burnt spot.

The orb on right kept moving towards the door as he / it dint even register what had happen just now. When the orb on right was close to the door he touched the door and was absorbed in the white part of door.

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Inside a spacious and glorious looking hall a man was sitting on a throne. He was surrounded by many small orbs in different directions. All orbs had different colors and they were enclosed in a bubble like substance. But the man was looking at the closed white and black door without blinking. If not observed closely, he can be even confused as statue. He was about to look at one of the orb placed closely beside him on his left when suddenly a white orb was ejected from the white side of the black and white door. A look of delight appeared in his eyes on the seeing the orb.

As the orb reached within 2 meters from his throne, he politely called out "Wake up my child".

The orb suddenly halted and turned into a young man with an height of 6 ft. He was fair in complexion and had toned muscular body like an athlete. He had jet black hairs and dark brown eyes. His face was clean shaven and looked fresh to the eyes giving a comforting feeling.

"Huh... " a confused voice ranged out "Where am I? Dint I just die?"

"Hello my child. And yes you are dead, at least from your old world." The mighty figured informed him.

"Really Oh damn. Oh and was I able to save those other people? And what happen to my family?" the young man asked

"You don't seem that affected by your death it seems." the might figure voiced out his opinion.

"Oh no actually I had made peace with myself before I jumped out of bus dragging him. I was anyway going to die that day, so I made peace with myself and tried to save others. So being informed that you are dead, is nothing more than just stating the fact that you know is true. In this case the fact is that I am dead, since I cant do anything then lets just accept it and move on." the young man replied with a sad voice " Anyways might I ask who are you? And also can you tell me what happened to my family after my death?" the young man inquired.

"Your family was truly sad on knowing that you are no longer with them, but they made peace with the fact after knowing that you sacrificed yourself to save others. They lived a happy or comfortable life after that, but they never forgot about you. Your family received quite a great compensation from both countries as well as other survivors. And to answer your question you can call me God because I am the one above all." God replied with power in his voice.

"Oh thank you. Its good to know that they made peace with my death. Thank you God." young man replied with a thankful bow

"Its alright my child. Now that all formalities are done with, I want to inform you that you will be sent to the next cycle of rebirth. But after your selfless sacrifice, your positive karma has skyrocketed so much that there is no black in your body. There have only been some precedence like this before you. Now as per the rules you will get two wishes before you head into the new world. Now you can make the wishes so you can move on." God

"Two wishes? Can you explain me about the world where I will be going to, so that I can make my wishes?" young man

"This is the world which is eighty percent covered in water. There are close to twelve thousand islands in this world. People can gain powers here by training and eating some special fruits which change your body on DNA level to gain access to any of the one power. This is a fantasy like world by the name of One Piece." God

"You mean the world of One Piece that I have seen anime and read manga of?" young man

"Yes, but when you are reborn there you will have to recollection of the same. The timeline I will let you decide, but even with using one wish you not be able to sustain its memories of the happenings." God

"Then what can I make a wish for?" young man

"You make a wish to allow for any power related to this world, but power from another world will not work. You can even wish for one piece world system." God

"Ok then my first wish is for a one piece world system with unlimited system currency and the system shall have weapons from all other worlds including my previous world." Young man

"Well you ask for too much but it can be granted except for the system currency part. I can make the change that even small missions will award extravagantly. I also need to tell you before you make any other wish, I will add the a function in the system to remove your devil fruits curse and will allow you to not be affected by the sea. You will also be able to eat more than one devil fruit, but you will have to pay with system currency for both." God

"Ok that is understandable. Now second wish is that I want to be born as Monkey D. Luffy and my appearance shall be like Sasuke Uchiha from Naruto world." young man

"That can be done, but it will not be counted as part of your wish as it is basic to be able to choose whom you want to be and what to look like." God

"Ok then let me think for the next wish." young man

"Take your time." God

'Now what shall I wish for? I dont think I need anything else. I can wish for a devil fruit to be given to me instead of Gomu Gomu no mi. But then what to go for, Mera Mera no mi will be eaten by Ace. Magu Magu no mi is one choice, pika pika no mi is another. Lets first confirm if it is possible to duplicate devil fruits powers or not.'

"God can I duplicate a devil fruits power, if it is already eaten by someone else?" young man

"No. By laws of world, the power of one fruit can not be duplicated even if it is for you. You can though extract them from there dead bodies as an inbuilt function of the system. But duplicating them will not be possible. You can just tell me which fruit you want Shanks to give you as your first. Whichever fruit you wish for, I will make sure no has eaten during your time. And it will not be counted as wish." God

"Ok then I want Rumble Rumble no mi. And also does the system have infinite storage space?" young man

"No the system does have storage space, which will increase with your power gradually. But you still need to use system currency to unlock it." God

"Then does the system have function of changing system currency to beli and reverse?" young man

"Yes it does. The ratio will 10000 beli for 1 system currency. You can do the exchange both ways." God

"You also have added this then what do I make a wish for? It is practically an very overpowered system" young man

"Well that is what you get when you do something like sacrificing yourself for others." God

"Thanks for the compliment." young man

"You'r welcome. Now please make your next wish." God

"Can I use this wish to get a body of saitama?" young man

"No" God

"Can I use this wish to allow me to train my body to the level of saitama?" young man

"No, as it will break the world law. You can train your body to unimaginable level, but to the level of saitama where you can destroy a world with one punch is not possible." God

"Ok. Oh ya can I wish for Luffy's mother to be alive and have her take care of me?" young man

"Luffy's mother is alive, but she has to be with Dragon due bounty on her head so she cannot take care of you." God

"Well atleast I know that she is alive. Wonder what she is like? Well then can I save this wish and make one at later point when I need it?" young man

"No because you will forget everything about our conversation when you leave." God

"Ok, then can I ask for a power like save and load from time to time?" young man

"No that disturb the time flow of the world." God

"Then what do I even wish for?" young man

"I dont know, its your decision" God

"You have already given or denied whatever I can think of. Let me think for sometime." young man

"You can take your time." God

'Now what is even remaining to wish for. How about world travel?'

"How about travelling from one world to another?" young man

"No" God

"Then what about increasing my senses and perception of people or danger?" young man

"System has it." God replied with a smile

"Oh for the love of God, what else is remaining?" young man let out his frustrations "Then what about let me save this wish and let me use it after my death and when I visit here again?"

"No once you leave, whether you use this wish or not it will be discarded after your death in this new world" God

"Ok then how about this, give the system a function that will help me see what will happen during Luffy's timeline as written by ODA sensei." young man

"Well its violating the world laws a little, but there is nothing that says it is not possible." God

"Then do it. I am extremely tired of thinking any more wishes" young man said with a relief in his voice

"Alright it is done. Now go ahead and enjoy your life my child." God

"Yes thanks a lot god. I .." before the young man could even complete what he wanted to say, he was pulled into one of the ORB floating close to the GOD.

"Lets watch how you enjoy your life this time my child." God

As if waiting for the cue, a very beautiful women suddenly appeared just beside his throne.

"You gave him a lot" the women stated it as a matter of fact.

"Well I was bored, now that I have some chance for entertainment why not go all out just for this once." God

"Cant disagree with it. I have been bored for who knows how long. It will be fun to watch his journey through this new life" women

Hey guys, how you doing? Well here I start with my novel. Just before I start some declarations I do not own anything in this novel, not the character. I am writing this novel with how I wish an Ideal one piece rewrite shall be. Since I cant directly start using Luffy as it is from One piece, so this is just another way. Now the first chapter, I have read in some novel which I dont remember, but the death was similar. If you know let me know in the comments as I will make sure to note it down in my disclaimer.

Thanks and enjoy my version of Ideal one piece.

PS : I am also going to use items / there powers like there active or passive for ideas from DOTA 2 and LOL as I am very bad with imagining new ones. HAHAHA

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