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The author enslaved all the characters and ordered them to be the background for the main character. - That's how this fanfiction feels. You read and think how convenient everything is, and the pirates leave loot in the bodies, allowing the hero to pick up the remnants, the main characters just nod to all requests, a soulless story turns out.
It pretty freckin good, it's one piece so obviously the world background is the best already. The character design looks cool, he looks pretty chilling, and also likes how the author used the clothing form the villain group in naruto (forgot the name). Only thing I can say is that I want more and hope the author uploads more frequently. I would at least want two chapters a week but I get that people have a life, but I hope the author doesn't drop this since this has so much potential to be one of the best fan ics.
the story starts really weak in Firsts chapters, and a little short, the type was bad too, but It gets really good in the next chapters, the author start to Focus in povsand the chapte became more long, fells like he really improves or puts more effort into It, good work dude, and If you could not include harem shit into It i really would appreciate, thanks. And congrats...
I like where the story is going and would like to see more. the only thing is that sometimes stuff feels forced, for example, people doing stuff for no reason other than convenience to the plot which makes the story a little bland. writing quality 5 stability of updates 4 story development 5 character design 3 world background 5 this story is a solid 4.4
And guys the MC is not nerfed with his Sharingan Powers, the difference is that the Power source for his eyes Powers is his stamina and endurance(not chakra), so he needs training and battle strong People to grow strong like any other one piece character.......the Sharingan is like a Devil fruit so has space for growth......