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Review Detail of charreos in One piece: Majestic Eyes

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charreos
charreosLv33yrcharreos

I like where the story is going and would like to see more. the only thing is that sometimes stuff feels forced, for example, people doing stuff for no reason other than convenience to the plot which makes the story a little bland. writing quality 5 stability of updates 4 story development 5 character design 3 world background 5 this story is a solid 4.4

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One piece: Majestic Eyes

_Khaled_

Liked it!

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_Khaled_
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What do you mean by forced? I’m genuinely asking so I can improve it

charreos
charreosLv3charreos

for example, at the start Rayleigh is too eager to help the mc it's just one month of waiting for him and Rayleigh wasted years of his life for the stranger, the guy's a legend a lot of people will wait for him and stay conscious after his test, I'm not saying its easy just saying that there are a lot who would do the same and succeed. also, loke trusts the mc too easily, for example, loke needs a reason to give a stranger the responsibility of saving his father, he trusted him too easily. that's pretty much it, really enjoyed your book by the way I'm waiting for the next chapter. also

_Khaled_:What do you mean by forced? I’m genuinely asking so I can improve it