KingJoker
I will be open it pretty good writing but the second I read that the main character has eaten the jacket fruit I lost all interest into it. The lame power with not many if any good applications. I'm not a fan of op character fic but on the other hand I'm not the biggest fan of the story like The Bite either. So the story just doesn't hit my personal taste. I read until chapter 8 but still cant find my self reading further. To all the people who enjoy this story have fun and the author continue writing it not a bad story just doesn't suit my taste.
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It's good from the start, I really like story and the characters. But the author ruined it's story in the minion island arc. It's disappointing, he helped law to get ope2 fruit even he know it's so risky yet he didn't gain advantage or benefits only promises. Heck even law given asylum to marine and MC lost a crew member. Author portray the mc a smart guy and tactician but suddenly becomes dumb. If the author recruit law I will not dropped this ff, yet now I'm to cliche for the plot even though he awakened conquerors haki.
*chefs kiss* perfection, this is one of the best stories I have ever gotten to read writing quality- I am no expert there are little mistakes here and there but they don't affect the flow at all like words twice or something like that, 5 stars. stability of updates- the author keeps being consistent and sometimes publishes two chapters a day so 5 stars story development- one of the best aspects of this fanfic is its development and story progressing, not only nothing is forced but every little change to the world of one piece has ripples that come later, it gives the same feeling as reading one piece again where the world slowly builds around you. 5/5 sorry I can't give 10/5 character design- I'll tell the truth there aren't a lot of OC's if at all, but the characters stay true to what is shown in the anime. I would give 4/5 but this story deserves its 5 stars lol world background- well... its one piece
Writing quality : 5 π I can't really judge this but it's not confusing i am able to follow everything that's happening in the story . Story development : 5 π instead of following the same boring path that most onepiece fanfiction stay on the author went for a new start new sea with i am really happy about that. Character design : 5 π Mc is a 50/50 blend of quirky and competent which makes for a very enjoyable read. Update stability : 5 π author has been very consistent so far with 2 chapters daily and they might do a 10 chapter mass release or they might bump up from 2 daily chapters to 3 for a bit which is amazing don't get burned out author. World background : 5 π it's onepiece and the author is exploring new blues not just the east blue. Conclusion: IT'S REALLY GOOD READ IT. PS : I am excited to see just how the mc is going to exploit the jacket jacket no mi good luck author.
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