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"Can you let me go in first?" Mu Feng's voice wasn't loud, but in the noisy environment, everyone heard him.
Everyone around was taken aback and then burst into roaring laughter.
"Boy, how old are you!?"
"Let you pass!? I've been waiting for a week."
"Go home and drink milk, kid."
"Boy!" Suddenly, a handsome man with a full face of flesh stood before Mu Feng and said sharply, "This is the Hunter's Guild! It's not a place for someone like you. Go back where you came from."
"It's 'Giant Man' Sman!! It's said that this guy hunted a pirate with a bounty of 230 million Baileys in the Grand Line and is the strongest pirate hunter in the North Sea!!"
"It's said that he refused the Marines' invitation back then, so seeing him here is surprising."
"Can you stay away from me?" Mu Feng frowned, took two steps back, and said, "Has anyone told you that you have bad breath?"
Sman was taken aback, then angrily said, "What did you say!?"
"I said you have bad breath. Didn't you hear me? Go back and brush your teeth, then come back. The Hunter's Guild does not recruit people with bad breath," Mu Feng said slowly.
"You're asking for death! Do you know that, kid?" Sman's veins were bulging.
"Sman, kill this kid!"
"Come on, Sman. Don't tell me you're afraid."
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There were roaring sounds all around, whether from pirates or pirate hunters. Those who reach the Cambodian Islands through the first half of the Grand Line are not afraid of much.
Sman gritted his teeth and looked at Mu Feng again with killing intent.
"Boy! I'll remember in the next life not to talk nonsense!" Raising his fist, the muscles on his arm bulged as he swung at Mu Feng.
"Anilu," Mu Feng said lightly without even lifting an eyelid.
Anilu, who had long been unable to tolerate this arrogance, prepared to act.
"Discharge!" A thick column of electricity blasted down from the air.
In the next moment, Sman, who had just gotten worse off, was turned into a scorched object. The surrounding area suddenly fell silent; even a needle dropping could be heard clearly.
The sound of swallowing was obvious in the quiet environment.
Those who were here were not fools.
They had seen Devil Fruits before. Controlling thunder and lightning was a feat only possible with a Devil Fruit.
Thunder Fruit!?
That was known as the strongest Logia.
Such a person… should have the strength of a Quasi-Admiral. Even more shocking was that this Thunder Fruit user seemed to belong to someone else! When everyone looked at Mu Feng again, they were filled with fear and curiosity.
Mu Feng smiled faintly and said, "Since everyone is silent, I'll say a few words.
My dear — Senju Hashirama, the Vice President of the Hunter's Guild.
So, everyone is blocking my way. Isn't it a bit inappropriate to keep me out? Of course, I'm thrilled that everyone is enthusiastic about joining the Hunter's Guild."
Senju Hashirama!?
Vice President of the Hunter's Guild!?
Mu Feng's words instantly shocked the crowd.
Everyone couldn't believe it… One person who had defeated the BIG·MOM pirate group and overpowered the beast Kaido was a young man who looked no older than 20. This world… is too crazy.
However, those who could wield the Thunder Fruit were not weak. Moreover, pretending to be Senju Hashirama in front of the Hunter's Guild was a suicidal act.
All of this proved one thing…
That the guy in front of them was indeed Senju Hashirama!
"I want to join the Hunter's Guild, okay?" someone suddenly asked.
Everyone in the room quickly turned their eyes to Mu Feng, eagerly awaiting his answer.
This was the purpose of everyone's visit.
"No problem at all."
Before Mu Feng's answer could fully register, he continued, "However, the Hunter's Guild does not recruit the weak.
Only those who are strong, whether Marine, Pirate, or Pirate Hunter, can join the Hunter's Guild.
The minimum requirement for the guild is either a Devil Fruit power or strong Haki.
If you don't meet the standard, don't even think about joining.
Otherwise… I won't be responsible for any deaths in the Hunter's Guild.
Moreover, the Hunter's Guild will not be responsible for the life and death of any hunter.
So if you're seeking asylum here, you might as well leave now.
Our Hunter's Guild is a completely neutral organization; becoming a hunter only grants you the right to receive tasks.
Hmm... The Hunter's Guild is closed today, so could you please leave? Although it was an inquiring tone, it was filled with an unmistakable refusal.
Soon, the crowd surrounding the Hunter's Guild dispersed.
No one wanted to provoke Mu Feng, and his words dispelled 80% of the desire to join the Hunter's Guild.
The threshold for the Hunter's Guild!?
Mu Feng didn't think it was high; this was the Hunter's Guild, not a charity organization.
Consider this: in Hunter x Hunter, the guild only had a few hundred hunters after a century of development.
Mu Feng believed the number of hunters for his Hunter's Guild should be kept below 1,000.
Making a hunter's license a mark of strength would attract more people.
Imagine, before a battle, one pirate pulls out their hunter's license, and the other can't. The pirate with the license could boast, "You scum, who don't even have a hunter's license, are not worthy to fight me."
Then, turn around and leave. Tsk, tsk… the impact is immense.
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