Reviews of One Piece: Dimon Legend

First of all the grammar is beyond shit, The POV is all over the place with its sudden shifts almost every paragraph, There is no development towards the the sudden reincarnation or no explanation of why he is reincarnated and even the mc doesn't question his reincarnation, Next mc doesn't even have a personality, I could go on and on but it's not even worth it, (No hate arthor just my honest review but good try though it's not the worst I've seen)