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Omniversal: Nameless Origins

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Nipher · Fantasy
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Birth & Discovery

Point-Zero, the place of all beginnings... Cradle to the omniverse.. And the roots to all of existence...

Too the ancients, located at Point-Zero. There was only muted-lull and ebony void. A desolate place devoid of concept. It was where I witnessed the of all things: The birth of myself, my friends, my foes, the beings I once looked upon as rivals, as well as the things I hold dear and worst of all.. The things I detest.

It was black and stale as there was nothing to vibe excitement or sentiment. Nix occurrences, naught to ponder about. Leaving me unaware of my own existence... For what was an incomprehensible amount of time as there were no phenomena to understand, only an empty void...

That was until... *BOOM!*, the first coming of awareness was that of my senses, blasting full throttle as my barely sentient consciousness struggled to make out what was happening as I was being pushed and shoved, jolted and gnawed, like the very fiber of my existence was being ripped apart. Being scarcely able to hold myself together through sheer force of will along with my unknown desire to remain existent, until the blast stopped and finally died down, this resulted In me discovering I had some form of sense, the sense of touch but most importantly the sense of self, later in time, when I finally calmed down from the extreme shock, I tried to reach out with my sense of touch... nothing, the thing that caused that unrivaled torment... it had just vanished, disappeared with out a trace... or so I thought...

Once again I tried and reached out once more... still null, and as such, this repeated for quite some time but after this time period of drifting through the abyss, I was slowly returning to my vacuous self, until upon chance I finally felt something, for the first time I actually felt something other than that jolt, that riveting jolt, It was jagged and it was so colossal I couldn't feel the entire thing, It was hard and immovable, stuck In place, so i waited there... But whilst bidding my time I discovering that I could inhabit smaller objects laying upon this larger, colossal one. But after yet another long wait to find out and understand(even if a little bit) what may occur next, and so I waited more, again and again, my incapable mind ignorant of how much time had actually passed.

During that time i felt something gush by, it was flowing freely around my vessel unlike the solid I was lying on in its colossal size, that i was feeling with my sense, and it was getting larger and larger with every moment till it surrounded and enveloped me in my entirety.

But due to this I was being moved around, even though I wasn't in control of my movements, it propelled me around, as such I aimlessly drifted through whatever this substance was composed of.

I aimlessly drifted stumbling upon some interesting things and places, as some areas i was towed through, the matter which i would later learn to be molecules, they were vibrating violently, originating from cracks in the solid giant, and one time i was propelled out of the flowing substance which caused some "slight" fear in me as i was thought that i would just return back into that boringly dull void but some unknown force pulled me back down which caused me confused as i didn't know such a thing was possible, that and i didn't know anything was possible in all honesty, but anyway, there were also these large dips in the giant solid which is where i discovered the vibrating stuff.

During the long, undirected along with being hauled around exploration of whatever i being pushed and pulled about inside of, one time, there was a giant impact on the outside of what solution i was in, which was similar but far weaker than the big boom, but it happened directly over me which lead me to abandon the small solid thing i was inhabiting as it got demolished but luckily enough after the impact another small solid fell towards me and i managed to inhabit it. in mid air by the way! But as I fell back into the giant body of the free flowing substances, I was curious as to why i was falling a bit slower than last time like there was a mystery force blocking my descent but that force intrigued me for sometime after. Also, another time i got hit by a massive amount of an extremely fast substance which damaged the solid thing but didn't break it which was lucky for me i guess.

When I finally went back into the large body of free unconfined mass, i once again began the goalless adventure of being dragged around, passing some time once more, until i sensed and discovered some large thing I didn't know what it was at the time but it actually had the freedom too move around, unlike me but it destroyed my already damaged solid stuff body, which surprised me but then I had a thought, a hasty solution to my formlessness and a sparkling idea made of cold avarice... that like the former vessel, I could inhabit it too...

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being profiling:

name: - none

race: - none (technically a rock/pebble)

age: - before the omniverse, infantile

nothing else as present

soul: 0 → 1

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Hello readers(if there's any), this is my first time writing a novel and as such i would like to be given advice on the structure of my writing e.g. if there are better words or phrasings or even the sciences behind some sections to use but i would prefer none on the story itself as that's the main thing i want to work on.

Also just to clarify, i may change the title of this novel as i currently don't think the current one doesn't fit

update: the novel is now named; Omniversal: Nameless Origins

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