Reviews of O.t.W.

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I Finally find a story where Rebekah gets some love And this is how you end it.

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its a pretty good idea but the plot is just far too forced I mean come on its just sad how forced the plot is because the idea is pretty good and does have potential but this needs like a rewrite or something because as I have already said the story is being forced and just isn't good a way to have avoided the plot to feel so forced is by slowly introducing it like have the mc hang around the casts of **** wolf and originals and then after some time .You could have also have had the original jaguar's be something the casts brought instead of having their decendents brought. Also wats up with the Rebecca kinda romance thing ur going for seems forced ik I keep saying that but its true a lot of this fanfics plot is forced a way u could have maybe avoided this is by instead of doing the masssssssssiiiiiiivvvvvve time skips u had have like a best bits montage from the ice age to present events including y the mc is into Rebecca and their first meeting etc.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------A very good fanfiction i hope you don´t drop it------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I am very happy about a Rebecca story you can look almost anywhere on web Wattpad and you won't find a story that focuses on Rebecca I think it's because she's probably the well-adjusted one of all of the family all she wants is to be human and to have a family again you know but she's never going to get it but like I said she's the most well-adjusted so she's never really shown it's all about Elijah and Klaus and Cole it's never about her so I thank you

The only reason u didn’t get a full 5 is bc of the ending but other than that I love the op mc and everything else about this.

Great story with a -1000 ending , do not read as it will just make you rage at the terrible ending that comes from laziness to finish the story

Nice story all the best and I hope you keep up the good work...................................................................................

Hello author I was wondering if I could use ur story as a reference for an upcoming fanfics I’m thinking of writing it’s a mix between the **** wolf series as well as originals with mc being a Witcher and right now I’m tryna figure out how to implement the mc in the story idk whether the mc should be born or reincarnated into the world ......

The story is really good And I get really excited when a new chapter is posted I can’t wait t see what else the author has in store. Thanks

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Great story. Really didn’t expect it to be so well written. I love it🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾😝😝😝😝

NPC's from oblivion have more personality than these people...................................................................................................................................................

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Dropped??

This book is really amazing. If you want a different place where it's the wolf that's strong this time not vampires, this book is perfect for you. However, it takes a while to update, but it's all worth it.

too much **** wolf not enough vampire even though i came for werewolf, it is still a vampire fanfic ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,