Review Detail of _6_6_6_ in O.t.W.

its a pretty good idea but the plot is just far too forced I mean come on its just sad how forced the plot is because the idea is pretty good and does have potential but this needs like a rewrite or something because as I have already said the story is being forced and just isn't good a way to have avoided the plot to feel so forced is by slowly introducing it like have the mc hang around the casts of **** wolf and originals and then after some time .You could have also have had the original jaguar's be something the casts brought instead of having their decendents brought. Also wats up with the Rebecca kinda romance thing ur going for seems forced ik I keep saying that but its true a lot of this fanfics plot is forced a way u could have maybe avoided this is by instead of doing the masssssssssiiiiiiivvvvvve time skips u had have like a best bits montage from the ice age to present events including y the mc is into Rebecca and their first meeting etc.