Reviews of Naruto: The White Spider of the Leaf

I really love this fan fic. This is one of the first if not only ones were the MC is in the storyline were Minato is still a student. And he does not have any cheats and is just average, and has to get strength just by his will power and tenacity to get it.

I dont like the MC;s personality....too naruto ish or comedic. I dont like the fact that its konoha. hate that shit. Dont like him being friends with an OG MC. updates suck. The MC being born during minatos era is dope. plus he dont have special shit or a system. dope. I like the OC too, she nice. Plus his interactions with the characters , despite me not liking it is nice. And the fact that he seems to be a martial artist is also dope. And he is weak to strong, but not too much, thats god. dont like instant gods or weak bitches. if he is that or swordsman or weapons user. cool. The chps are well written and frankly it flows well [ especially with the MC's personality ]. would be cool to see MC be a martial artist with his own variations. And seals even. Arguably the most power shit in naruto. would cool to see MC exploring the world and new shit. If romance just build dont rush. other than its cool. Overall its cool. GL.

Not much to say. The plot's good, as the MC isn't OP from the start and gets absolutely nothing other than the plotline.Let's see how this goes.

Me encanta la historia, hasta el momento muy buena trama y con un personaje que muestra que el trabajo duro es por donde en verdad encuentras la fuerza. Sigue asi y saca mas capitulos para continuar con la historia que esta re genial.

Cant wait for more

too little known about the story so far..... i'm looking forward to know what happen in the future...............................................................................

Looking forward to know why hr is called the white spider.

Shameless review from the author as per usual, I'd like to just say a few things~ First off, I'm only writing this for fun so I'm unsure of how often I'll update it, probably not too often but I'll try to at least keep the quality up there. Second off, IF anyone is interested in reading more of my works, you can do so by either reading my Fairy Tail fanfic, which as I've said is on Hiatus at the moment. Or, Going to Goodnovel and reading my other book which I'm posting there, Eyes of the Emperor, an original story this time :> https://w w w.goodnovel.com/book_info/21000004702/null/Eyes-of-the-Emperor This here would be the link~ If you do decide to go over there, then please enjoy reading <3

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