Review Detail of amaturewriter in Naruto: The White Spider of the Leaf

I dont like the MC;s personality....too naruto ish or comedic. I dont like the fact that its konoha. hate that shit. Dont like him being friends with an OG MC. updates suck. The MC being born during minatos era is dope. plus he dont have special shit or a system. dope. I like the OC too, she nice. Plus his interactions with the characters , despite me not liking it is nice. And the fact that he seems to be a martial artist is also dope. And he is weak to strong, but not too much, thats god. dont like instant gods or weak bitches. if he is that or swordsman or weapons user. cool. The chps are well written and frankly it flows well [ especially with the MC's personality ]. would be cool to see MC be a martial artist with his own variations. And seals even. Arguably the most power shit in naruto. would cool to see MC exploring the world and new shit. If romance just build dont rush. other than its cool. Overall its cool. GL.