Reviews of Naruto: The Journey Of The Alpha Wolf

Truthfully it's my first time writing so I would really love feedback. All reviews are welcome as long as you bring things that'll help me improve instead of simply bringing me your own personal bias. Mako D. Carson will not stray from his original personality but he may change how he interacts with people depending on how things play out. I just want to be a good writer, almost as good as Einlion (if you know who that is then you obviously have class). Just give my book a try before you hate on it. If you don't like it then feel free to give a bad review as I don't particularly mind.

The the mc is unique with appearance and personality, the story development so far is great, the chapter update rate is also great the only bad thing is your grammar but it isn’t that obvious, you only need to proofread for errors, and i personally think that the story has potential.

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I re added this review because he finally uploaded a chapter. thanks. sorry for doubting you. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

Great novel definitely want more I’m glad your making such a high quality naruto novel 10/10 bravo tsunade got big tits tho This is gonna be one of three Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada Yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada yadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayadayada

Great story. Please more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

Three chapters in this novel as some serious potential. Hope you continue writing ~Autor-san~ 😂 Hope to see you writing this in the futur Max

This flower has been asked, this flower will deliver. But there is the 140 character thing that just grinds my floral gears so imma rant till this is a suitable length

So far this story is progressing very well. It has a well thought out character. He has aggressive tendencies that will go well with the shinobi world. He might have a good rivalry with Might Guy because they both like to either fight or get their body to the peak.

I see a lot of potential in the novel the Mc is perfect a little badass if you do not put it super op at the beginning and let it train it would be great. If you upload daily chapters I will support you with some power stones :) Do not give up pls.

I like the concept, so here is 5 stars to motivate you to write more. There is only one chapter out so I can’t really review it properly but it looks like it has promise