plot holes?
this is not a chapter, I just want to ask and clarify something.
Well, I want to ask, if any of you noticed plot holes in this story?. Cuz I don't have much knowledge about it.
if you noticed any plot holes till now, pls tell me, and I will try to correct them or improve them.
And some people are also asking why tobirama isn't alive? why Konoha is too weak...
well, I just make some changes, all author make their own changes.
and also my first language isn't English, so, it gives me a lot of problems because I can't figure out where the grammar mistakes are. I already use Grammarly from the start and it corrects many words, but despite using that, people are saying, grammar mistakes, so I can't figure it out, cuz I am at a mediocre level in English.
so, any suggestions? I will be very thankful to you.