Reviews of my world H created by God- fanfic

my collection of H that I have seen and saved those that I could xD::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

Why would the mc want revenge when he NTR himself, he made a bunch of changes to the world. But he still allowed himself to be NTR even though he could have PREVENTED IT!! I don't understand man, I simply don't understand. If you are into being NTR just simply say it or give a warning, Author it just saves everyone the time and the frustration from reading this. Or you could be incredibly stupid that the idea flew over your head. But I highly doubt this, because even the most stupidest of culture people would not NTR themselves, will unless they liked it.

I've gotta be honest the writing is very low quality, there isn't really story development. he breaks up with a cheating gf in one chapter the next bangs some random chick who he talked to for less than 2 minutes then the next day had a foursome with her friends that the chick set up, the whole story makes zero sense, zero build up or fulfillment.

Retarted mc with the hero complex. I was already disgusted by some choices of author. Like when he make one of the girls friend with benefits and then make girl have smex wihh other guy. You know what happens next? The mc proclaim his love and become couple with this cheap harlot. If you thinking was there any romance between them or was u too harsh on calling girl harlot - she literally with mc because of his "blade" and that's why she have smex with oga, just for fun. Are you sure you hate ntr? Doesn't seems like it. But yeah, in the latest chapters guy who kill and torture bad people (they are bad so he have a perfect reason, right) go out of his way to be a hero. And help ntr pair. Woah. Are you like morally Retarted or something. I am pretty sure killing and torturing people even bad ones, is pretty evil. But that's not a point. He just give away girls because he is a nice guy. In a harem novel without even being friends with either of them. Conclusions ; soyboy trash novel.

should've put an NTR tag on this, mate. 😞

A WARNING!! THIS IS NTR!! author enter an NTR tag or write about it in the description. .. . .. . . .. . .. . . .. . .. . .. . . . . .. . .. . . . . . . . . .. . .. . .. . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . ..

I didn't like that the mc let the class rep. sleep with that oga. -1 for this and please arrange all the characters in a character list. I really get confused.

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I am disappointed this fic got deleted, didn't get notice till chapters were already removed

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man, sadly you deleted this fix but I respect your choice. want to ask the question this is about this guy right? cause I forget about what this story is about and I remember I have read such a fix as this guy as the protagonist

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