Review Detail of Thissmithy_Manga in my world H created by God- fanfic

I've gotta be honest the writing is very low quality, there isn't really story development. he breaks up with a cheating gf in one chapter the next bangs some random chick who he talked to for less than 2 minutes then the next day had a foursome with her friends that the chick set up, the whole story makes zero sense, zero build up or fulfillment.