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Initially, I hated this novel and wanted to drop it, but I kept reading and when I reached 77, it became my favorite. And I can say now that this is one of the best Harem + Romance novels I have read, but this novel is also packed with good actions and fun adventures. Pros: The five main girls are all unique in their own way. + Nyla is a yandere whom you will start liking around chapter 90. + Helia hates humans and you might end up disliking her from start but as the story progresses her character becomes more likable. + Lia is the ideal wife one can have, you will fall in love with her but at the start, she gives cold shoulders to MC which may annoy you, but hold onto it until the 50 chapters. As the author mentioned, he doesn't do force development and has given some chapters to develop their relationship in a natural way. + Layla is a mystery even until the current chapters I have read. But She is the number one girl and she will become your most favorite girl even though she doesn't have much screen time until now but you will understand why as you read. + Let's talk about the main character, he is naive at first and acts in an easy pushover way at the start but when you pass the 77 chapters you will get to see his real side, a cold one, really awesome. That's also the chapter where it will make this novel your favorite. However, if you're a new novel reader then this novel is not for you. Because Most good novel takes the first 100 chapters to become good and it's the same as this one. It is for those who could endure the past 77 chapters. But I promise you that reading until 77 chapters will give you goosebumps, The best plot twist one can imagine and I got to understand everything after that. Cons: The only thing I don't like about this novel is that it doesn't have two thousand plus chapters and this book doesn't get much support because most people drop it before reading past the 40 chapters. Give it a chance, it's intriguing where this story will go with all the mystery and girls. I hope this book gets all the support so we can get to have a good happy ride.
Great read with cute girls. Power system actually makes some sense unlike other harem stories out there. I consider myself a binge reader, when I get up to date in something I normally drop it. This is one of the only stories to bring me back waiting for chapters, i even bought a privilege for the first time. My only complaint is that i wish the chapters were longer lol.
I can't make it even a few chapters in because I am cringing so much. Now normally I wouldn't write a review just because of that, but I am also confused because lots of people drop the novel because of that, yet there isn't a single other bad review? Only thing I can think of is that the author is deleting reviews with bad ratings or something idk if that is even possible. If not, just know I think this book feels soul crushingly cringe and forced, at least to me. If the author IS deleting reviews, then this doesn't matter because nobody will see it, although I'm more confused by the lack of bad ratings than anything. PS: my statements are my personal feelings and reaction to the book, If you like it then that's great, I'm glad you found a book that you like
17 chapters in and it’s a great start. Character development between the MC and FMC is growing slowly but surely. This book is written and edited by the author, it’s very easy to understand the writing, nothing too complex but just the way you’d like it. World building is probably coming along, we’re just 17 chapters in so it’s a bit early to point out stuff however, I’d say give this book a try since it has a familiar yet unique and new plot you might have not seen before. 👍👍
A naive innocent boy is trying to be a villain? it's funny how he want the good of both worlds but what will happen by putting legs in two boats? I can understand that it's still early but Author should try showing some bloodshed by him in the upcoming chapters as the work seems to be part of wpc 320 villain theme.
Sigh I honestly liked this novel alot i read decently past chapter 138 (didn't make to 170) but that was my limit i couldn't take a particular annoying character Slight spoiler below i guess idk NYLA i cant stand her she annoys me terribly and from my perspective she is forceful and doesn't take no for an answer and does way too much i read people saying they love her optimism cheerful and playfull attitude but to me there is a limit time and place for all those things and she has none and i will say it again to me she does way too much and that one character with that annoying personality ruined this whole novel for me I like everything else except her ( everyone has there own opinions and preferences and she severely goes against mine authors work isnt bad at all it is one of the better pieces of writing i have read but NYLA ruined it. I hope Author doesn't do the same on next novel) with that being said it is a good novel you can take my opinion in to consideration but i still recommend you read because you just might like it because not everyone has the same preferences feel free to disagree with me after giving this novel a try
Honestly its subpar writing....story had potential but it just wasnt developed well. The MC and his interactions seem forced...they dont feel natural. MC is too naive, too beta, too awkward and just not confident. I mean he has the most beautiful wife but he cant hold a conversation with other women easily. He keeps asking can I hug you, can i kiss you? and it feels too stupid when she has already shown him that its okay....I mean wife keeps helping him grow but he lacks ambition. You cant feel drive from him to grow etc. She tells him to read and gain knowledge but it didnt show him doing that...honestly story is not written well. Around chapter 75 I just couldnt anymore