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With 16 chapters released I am really enjoying the story so far. It seems like the novel is gonna be very long in length. Since we are still in the prologue really. My only complaint would be character descriptions have already escaped my mind only in 20 chapters. I think having maybe a compendium or something for characters will help in the long run. I look forward to the rest of the story
Is this meant to be the Latin word “to transfer” “or to haul?”
Was he born in a subtropical climate and moved to Canada?
Really like the detailing In the clothes
A lot of cultivation story’s have the heavens as sentient. Or a collection of Doa’s that enforce rules upon the realms
After reading the first 18-20 chapters that have been posted I have to say it’s a amazing story. The update pace is great with the author wanting to post 10 chapters a week. The ability of the author to describe the situation is top tier as well. With how little chapters have been posted the world has not been explored much, however as the story continues I have a good feeling about this aspect as well.
So far Volume 1 is amazing excited to see the future. Hopefully a happy yet deep story awaits
The tone of the writing is a little hard to understand. What I mean is with the story revolving around mythology which is often tradegy in nature, while the story seems to be a more happy natured harem story with great depth. The two tones of writing in my opinion are clashing.
Enjoyed the descriptive writing present, the including of real mythological characters, as well as Adam’s relationships so far.
With the MC being named Adam and the two women being hunted as the lovers of biblical Adam, wonder how they’re relationship will be..
The first sinners of mankind where Eve and Adam, who ate the apple from the Tree of Knowledge
The firstborn son of Adam from the Bible.
Eve and Lilith….. the two wives of Adam in the Bible. MC is named Adam 😊
Future wife? 🥸
Is ‘same’ supposed to be ‘Sae’?
I’ve had only a couple classes like this but they are always the best. Great learning en vironment
I thought she was a law student while he was a med student? Or did I misread.
Privetik is Hello in a very casual manner in Russian. For those who do not know
Any chance we can have a new chapter after the disclaimer chapter with images and descriptions of characters. I don’t know how long you plan on making the series but I always find it to be helpful seeing images and descriptions of characters for later.