Reviews of My teen romantic comedy is not going as I expected
My teen romantic comedy is not going as I expected
LowercaseGuy
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I'll just say this, stop putting so much emphasis on Hikigaya. Remember who is the protagonist despite the fact that it is difficult to create a novel to do the same as the canon just adding one more secondary character makes the story boring, so I would recommend that you reduce your participation in all the conversations and increase the participation of the protagonist so we see change.
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-This bk, the problem is its copy paste...like the conversations and the events, all of it are word for word cannon, with MC added and him [literally] saying one or two words,,,thats it...Plus this MC seems to be the generic bitc.h style MC, meaning this dude takes insults left and right without replying back.... Look, this FF would be dope,,,just fix some ****. Add personality or at least avoid following cannon so much, And give the MC a back gone,,,,yukino insults make him insult back, and hell make it hurt , her insults are cruel [and dont make MC apologize, IDK it would an interesting event to read]...so yah.GL...
