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Well this is the tenth review. So I figured out to write it down myself. I started this series with a goal in mind, to have fun and enjoy writing it. But midway thought an idea popped up my mind; why don't I turn it into a comic? And so I've done that :D The comic is now released for free at webtoon. You can check it out if you want. I apologize for my delay in updating the past period, I was kinda busy with the comic thing. However as everything is settled then I can resume writing and publishing here with the same schedule I promised; two chapters per day. Hopefully you'll like the story :) Ranmaro
To be honest i don't find it interesting why not stay at the first idea of having 2 siblings get powers and make them each with unique powers having friends and family make stories interesting i don't see what people find good about killing everyone to make the mc gain powers ... it sucks that there is no real thoughts put in most of the stories no wonder they all get abandoned in the end
It's been quite sometime since I read about those system leveling up the MCs as they go on clearing the monsters of the dungeon, and honestly this genre never disappoints me. Well written with good grammar and keep updating it and include some pretty awesome special events in the system sometimes..... it's just a request but please consider it I love them very much. Will be waiting for the upcoming updates
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A really well done story so far! The descriptions are vivid and flow well together with the main text, the characters are interesting and believable, and the storyline keeps me wanting to turn the chapter to read more. The prose is finely woven, and this is a read definitely worth checking out! Good luck and keep up the good work.