KJVZeanso
Hello guys, KJVZeanso here, I want to ask you should I change the Title of this Webnovel based on the story or leave it there just like that ... Please comment down below... BTW I've already had some ideas regarding the new title which are: 1) Reboot Breaker 2) Solo Revenge of the Leveling Hero 3) Return of the Foresight Hero and etc ... BTW you can add some of your thoughts on the comments down below ... Thank you.
The story is based on Time Traveling but I can feel this story will go on the multiverse or some sort which is quite great since you (Author) probably bluntly reveal that in the first chapter I believe or some sort by saying that is Timelines or whatever it is ... Still, if this character was meant to be OP, I really want to know how much since Leveling Characters are to be meant like that.
Hello guys, KJVZeanso here, I'm sorry but I want to ask you again about changing the Title of this Webnovel based on the story since I know that the title may be over too much or some sort... Can you please let me know although I already have some in mind. 1) My Solo Revenge Agains the Divine Please comment down below if you had other thoughts on my new title, thank you !!!!
The problem with this Webnovel is not the writing as it somehow keeps getting better over time, but the problem of this story is about the choice of the MC which is a very abstract one unlike Rangga Twelve, the one that is introduced in the prologue that has total determination to become more powerful. But it seems to me that, the reason why you chose the Younger MC is to make him get more powerful since the younger the MC, the longer time of chance of him getting stronger which is quite understandable for me but still Rangga Twelve should be the MC of this story, rather than him being like a buff or some sort of the Past Live Avatars, for example, the likes of Avatar Roku and the others.
This is a problem for me, but still, I really think that the <Twelve Eyes of Time> concept was so very abstract since it seems that you tried to hide its true extent of powers. Although, I still wonder how it keeps warning the MC of some events like the current chapter that I just read. By the way, the zero volume is still the best volume regarding this story since it goes to the point where the main character does his thing which gives me more interesting questions about whether the MC should be judged or not ... But still, I felt that the main plot seems to reveal more things too early for some reason as if the pace is getting faster even though I thought it was a slow paced.
The story is getting more barren and there is no longer some world development from the recent chapters unlike the zero volume, but still, the main problem is, why is Rangga Twelve, the person that is shown in the prologue is not the Main Character of this story but his so-called his current Timeline self that seems to not having Carla as hid granddaughter yet which makes it so confusing....
KJVZeanso, I really appreciate that the story needs to be based on the MC, but still, I had some problems with it since the other characters are so barren. But still, you need to stop leveling up the MC More for now ...... Cause It seems the story is getting more barren for this so-called Main Plot.
Hello guys, KJVZeanso here, I just want to tell you that I've already decided the new title of this Webnovel and the new cover for this Webnovel. So please be warned that this Webnovel will no longer be titled My Superpower is Level Up anymore as it will changed into ... Solo Revenger: The Superpowered Leveling Sorcerer
An MC that is very young in age but already works in order to feed himself in a rich school is a unique one but it seems you've decided to make the MC strong first in order for him to have a triumphant return. But still, even though this Reboot Webnovel is going to be fast pacing, the previous MSPLU has a lot of explanations regarding how the MC had his power which is very long to read. Please let this comment, be your advice author.
A fast-pacing, time-traveling, level up-like character that tries to change time with sci-fi and magic integrated in order to increase the tension since the story will be about destroying things right? Just like the MSPLU previous Webnovel, it seems this story is not just a Copy-Cat of MHA and Solo Leveling now like the precious one since I can see the originalism of the world and characters.
It seems this Webnovel has a good start as this could be very interesting since the 'Reboot' concept is implemented here as like what I see in the MVM latest chapter that tells about the Loop or some sort which makes me wonder if that's the same thing since you say that this Webnovel is in the same timeline.