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The problem with this Webnovel is not the writing as it somehow keeps getting better over time, but the problem of this story is about the choice of the MC which is a very abstract one unlike Rangga Twelve, the one that is introduced in the prologue that has total determination to become more powerful. But it seems to me that, the reason why you chose the Younger MC is to make him get more powerful since the younger the MC, the longer time of chance of him getting stronger which is quite understandable for me but still Rangga Twelve should be the MC of this story, rather than him being like a buff or some sort of the Past Live Avatars, for example, the likes of Avatar Roku and the others.

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My Solo Revenge Against the Divine

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