Reviews of My Mask
My Mask
MoonDragonWolfe3
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The best Review advice I can give the writer is to look over the words again to make sure they are spelled correctly. Like the word cool was spelled as 'kool' in this story, it sounds right but isn't spelled right so it kind of throws the story off a bit for the readers. I like the story but I think it may be moving a bit too fast, like, slow down and try to use descriptions more. Try not to just gloss over things like the bloodline creation, it could have used more descriptions - readers like me enjoy reading the options provided to the MC and what the MC will choose. Thanks for the story!
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