Supernatural
This was a slightly below-average wish-fulfillment fic. While its core idea was okay, there were a lot of plot holes where the author seemed to forget that the MC had abilities that he got before he was born. There was also no real struggle since the MC basically had infinite system points which he could use to power up. Long story short, would be better if the MC was less of a Gary-Stu.
This novel is π. Better than most other I read on this site. ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ I don't like this having to type more than 140 character thing that webnovel have.
its a pretty good start... and the story have some originality all dragon ball fan-fic always go with either a Saiyan survivor or getting goku's body so getting cell's is a pretty good idea and about the chapters it updates daily so that's a good point not perfect like other novels where its more than 1 daily but 1 chapter per day is pretty much okay too I just wish it to continue like this and not turn out like other fanfic that was either dropped or on hiatus(but forgotten by the author already) this may even be better than the strongest legend of dragon ball fan-fic just needed more chapters... I read that fan-fic which is already finished in raws and it was good and I think this one can be better so please keep up the good work or maybe make it even better, something like more updates, so please finish this work before you go plan to make novels for a chain story that's all thank you for the chapters
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