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I Am The Supernatural
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Neat. Now put your Author's Notes at the end of the chapter plz
HA! Transcending a 6th stage tribulation. Pfft, at the rate SS is going, he'll be transcending a 9th stage tribulation before he does a 6th stage one.
Oh look at time. It's time to farm some Virtue EXP.
Art is an EXPLOSION!
I haven't read ahead but I got a feeling Foreshadowing~~
If you put "Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu Training Manual" then you don't need the 2nd sentence below to explain that it's knowledge, not a skill.
There is no civilian council, at least not during Naruto's time. The only council there is consists of an old hag, her old husband, a warmonger that everyone hates, and the Hokage. Everything else is mostly fanon.
Yet, it was also SS that got Doudou into trouble in the first place.
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Let's look at how Doudou treats his "owner" Now try to imagine if Doudou actually has a real brother and see if you want to be said brother.
half a quarter of an hour... isn't that just "a little over half a dozen minutes"?
You should fix this paragraph. It's split in two.
Like I said, it's because the Douluo Divine Realm got sucked into a Blackhole( after DD2.5) that the balance was broken and Spirit Beasts start to go extinct in DD3. When the Divine Realm returned after the event of DD3.5, the balance returned again in DD4.
It'll have been better if you didn't list the "Locked" or "Unwakened" things until the MC unlocked them. By not listing them you can have the MC "Unlock" them later which will at least give the illusion of MC working for his power. If you list them right from the start, then it feels as if everything was already given to MC on a silver platter and the MC just has to go through the motion to unlock their power. It gets rid of the fulfilling feeling people usually get when seeing the MC(or character they like) unlock new powers.
Actually, as long as the Douluo Divine Realm exists, Spirit Beasts can't go extinct and neither can humans. The Divine Realm serves to keep balance in the world as seen in DD2 when humans grew more powerful, so did Spirit Beasts. The reason that balance was broken in DD3 was because the Douluo Divine Realm got sucked into a black hole and couldn't help keep the balance. When they came back, the balance was restored and in DD4, Spirit Beasts even have their own planet.