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"Huh!!" Angel was shocked, just witnessing the moment unfold before her eyes. "Seems like we did good work, VICTORY!!" Michael declared openly.
"VICTORY!? WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?! CAN'T YOU SEE ANON...SCA..(sobs..)TTERED ALL OVER?!" Angel broke down even more.
"No, I have to..."
"You have to WHATT!!" Angel cut him off.
"You say 'VICTORY', yes somehow you defeated Callista but can't you see or was it part of your plan for Anon to DIE!! Just look," *points at Dorothy*, "Dorothy is lying there unconscious and YOU HAVE THE GUTS TO SAY 'VICTORY?!' MICHAEL!!"
She stood up, approached Callista, and confirmed that she wasn't dead. She then went up to Dorothy and confirmed too, "yes we won the battle but we lost the fight." She looked at the surrounding environment, looking like a horror movie, looking into eyes with tears dried out, she was completely sporadic and erratic, "pick up Dorothy and go, we have no business here again, will fix the damaged property," she went and sat at the center of the explosion.
"Angel, it's not like that, Anon is..."
"Dead!! He is dead, IS IT THAT HARD FOR SOMEONE LIKE YOU TO UNDERSTAND!?"
"No I mean he is here and he is..."
"He's dead body is here, why are you doing this, MICHAEL!! all he wanted to do was to save me, and you brought him to a fast end!! I am so pathetic!!"
It may seem that she hasn't noticed the floating stick and I was yet to reveal myself. I couldn't bear to see her like that but I was lost in my mind and filled with total blackness. "Is this how It would be when I die again?!!" With memories of my first death rushing through my head, the whole system on standby. Michael strolls even closer to her...
"Anon is with us and literally..."
"Stay back Michael, yes, Anon is truly with us and will remain in my mind eternally. He is the best friend I have had and no one can replace him, not you, not Dorothy, not even Callista who used to be my best friend."
Gradually and slowly the particles started disappearing, fading away little by little and would soon be nothing. "What is happening?!!" Angel was confused. It seemed like the spell was wearing off, hence, the remains of shadow were vanishing. Angel tried scooping the blood with her hand, she cried out, "WHY ARE YOU LEAVING ME, ANONN!!!"
She placed her two hands horizontally opposite each other and there *SLAMM!!* She hit her head against the ground, "Why do you choose to leave me?!!" Michael tried to come closer to assist but it was no use, she cast a spell, sprouting out sharp swords on the ground, preventing him from getting closer. Seemed like the breakdown had upgraded her sword-like spell, manifesting a new ability. *SLAM!!*
"ARE YOU GOING TO WATCH THIS, ANON!!! " The juncture I had those very words, I snapped out of it, I must be a coward, I can't even face my death, dropping the stick and rushing towards her from behind. She was about to go at it again, I was right on time, I placed my hands below her head before she could hurt herself again.
"Please stop Angel!! I'm alive," I revealed myself. She looked up to see me in complete tears.
"NOO!! I saw you die!!" she moved back.
"I'm sorry for making you go through this Angel... I'm such a fool *sobs*," I cried even more.
"Who are... you?!!" Angel asked.
"It's me, Anon!! Everything is fine now," I replied. She moved even further back.
"I question again, who are you? I watched my Anon die."
"I'm sorry Angel, (more tears dropped from my eyes) it was a spell."
"HUH?!!"
After the long wait, there we were, sitting beside Dorothy, I had already told Angel everything.
"You mean, everything was just a plan?!" she asked.
"We didn't plan for Shadow to end up like that but yes, it was."
*SLAP!!!*
"I'm sorry... I deserve that."
"But why didn't you guys tell me?" she asked.
"Well, the thing is, you were inside, there was no time and room to do that," Michael made it open to her.
She stood up and walked close to Michael, "I'm so happy everything ended up well!! *Smiles*" she was so relieved.
"Yes, so after all this is a vice. *SLAP!!*" she slapped Michael too.
"What was that for?!" He asked.
"Don't ever make a lady worry again," she responded, "But I tried telling you but.. *SLAP!!*(she hit him again) Ohh!! Why?!"
"But I wanted to tell.. (she raised her fist) Sorry ma, I will never make a lady worry again, I promise," He said sincerely as he bowed asking for forgiveness.
"There there, my boy, I have forgiven you."
"Pttf"
"What did you say?!"
"Sorry, ma wouldn't do it again ma!!"
*CHUCKLES* she laughed, he joined her, and we all laughed.
The next moment she returned to her angry face, and she started coming towards me, "You're in for it bro!!" Michael laughed, she turned to him with a calm yet furious face, "follow me," she said.
Michael calmly did as she said.
She held both my hand and his and said.
"We are in this together..."
"Nothing will separate us not even death."
"Now you boys tell me 'you will never leave me behind, you will be beside me no matter the situation'."
We both nodded.
*Silence*
"What are you waiting for?!"
"We will never leave you behind, we will be beside you no matter the situation," we both said.
"Now tell me... Now tell me... No, promise me, you wouldn't die, and not because of me."
We placed our hands on our chests, including Angel.
"I PROMISE TO NOT DIE BUT TO LIVE AND GO THROUGH THINGS TOGETHER," we all declared.
"Now we are good!!"
"No we... aren't." We looked to see Dorothy had regained consciousness.
"I promise to live the longest and not die no matter the circumstance."
We all smiled. It was a joyful moment. We were happy.