Roxy_Greyrat21
Didn't you already did a rewrite for this? Why didn't you just start a new one instead? And before you did that rewrite you still only update once a week so when are you actually going to finish a mushoku novel. If you don't think you can finish one just move on. I honestly think you should just move on to another anime or novel to work with on a fanfic. On all of your mushoku novels, you basically stop at the same spot each time before a rewrite or drop it. Do you know how frustrating it can be waiting months for you to speed up the plot to the teleportation arc just for you to drop/rewrite it each time. This happens like three to four times now. Tell me author, what is your goal for this novel? Are you actually going to complete it and update more or just leave your readers hanging all the time. Tell me so that I either keep this novel in my library or just drop it.
I hate these novels since the second act. Why change the ability to use high-level magic in Haki, can use magic to do body reinforcement and things like Armament Haki, and a magician can use magic to feel and discover the existence of something static and live like the observed Haki. And if he wanted to see a future, there is the eye that the Queen of Demons gave in the story Asli, which is not only the ability to see seconds in the future, but minutes and an hour according to mana consumption. And I have magic, the ability to create pressure on people, the stronger your magic is like Haki the Conqueror. Now I do not understand why he took Haki and acquires a curse. Otherwise, his magic could be higher than the average
All I can say is that I'm reviewless to write any review here on review section. One person is enough to be reincarnated then you add another one. Wew. You could've make where MC take over the body of Rudeus soul after reincarnating rather than being together with this man. Or you couldn't just simply abandon him cause Rudeus-fanatic? Cringe is all over the place. I suggest you can rewrite or make a whole new setting since the anime was already shown.
Capitulo 21 en este momento, me da rabia eso de que le está afectando ser un niño, tiene más de 20 años de la vida anterior y le afecta ser niño, también está eso de ser muy filiar en la mayoría de novelas que leo, normalmente pasa cuando los escritores tuvieron buenos padres o no se por que putas, pero que me maltraten sin dejarme explicar, y lo peor de todo un golpe en la cara, te aseguro que ya nada va a ser como antes, también está esto de que no cambia nada en la historia o eso hasta el momento, dónde está el puto efecto mariposa, no solo pasa cuando viajan al pasado autor, puede que mejore, vamos a leer 7 capitulos mas, si mejora escribo una respuesta a esta reseña, si no lo hago quiere decir que sigue siendo igual de malo.
The premise of the story is great, but as with the mc seems to lack meaningful connections and relationships with the other characters (with the exception of vivian), I cant help but look forward to the moment Arthur starts interacting with the rest of the cast. All in all though, the story is great, and im looking forward to the next chapter