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all i have to say is that the grammar is... very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very bad

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the grammar is abysmal so its really hard to follow what's happening, also nothing is really explained so stuff just happens without any prior explanation also there practically zero world building.

Abysmal writing. Storytelling's gone to the dogs. A pile of grammatically gibberish fused chapters that makes no sense. I can accept a few mispronounced words per chapter, but this story's really taking the micky out.

Quitando que MC me es molesto de momentos, un gran ff. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Beta mc,cool mc only cause of his power, simp like want only to impress his gurl and doing all the girls they request yahh a beta one at that and always dominated by his gurl like he can always win and like a child for me this is my though only mine

Good novel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

This fanfic is just like another group chat fanfic but yeah i still enjoy it. i have seen a lot fanfic like this(sis-con) or something else. . . If you want a fanfic group chat with harem i recommend this fanfic

I NEEDD MORE MORE OF THIS MORE MORE MORE KORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE KORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOR MORE MORE MORE MORE

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In these types of chat groups the MC always simps for Rias which is so beta because youre talking about a woman that no matter how you interpret it let a pervert die reincarnate him because he had a powerful tool and make him fight for oppai.....Wow so Average

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Good novel👍😎👍😎👍👍But please fix the grammars cause sometimes its a little confusing☺,😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓😫🙏🙏💓

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Quite good,... ....... ...................................... ............................................................................👌👍

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good and interesing chapters. ************************************************************************************************************************************************************

great story to read waiting on more. please don't give it up.,[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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