Chapter 1: Mort Hayes

A/N: If you saw the cover of this novel, its not mine so don't copyright me please. I'm still waiting for the commision I ordered from my sister who is a great artist btw.(1 year later, it never came🥲)

Now I hope you like my novel

WARNING:

•READ THE DESCRIPTION BITCHES!!!

•There might be a grammar or pronoun error. Just point it out for me in the comments of the paragraph and I will edit that.

•There might be a name error because in my draft, The MC's name is Daniel, but I changed it to Mort, since this is just another version of the original which is named Mort, which is btw my own novel too.

NOTE:

•Criticism is always welcome, also advice and some ideas is also welcome, I would like to improve my writing and make more story.

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"Hello guys, Mort here, today we're in France, Paris, famously known as the City of Love. So, Bonsoir mesdames et messieurs là-bas et préparez-vous à craindre la France(Good evening ladies and gentlemens, and get ready to fear France)." a handsome young man smirked and winked at the camera. The handsome man is Mort, he's currently holding a live stream in public.

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goalla333: Here he comes again!

pepperoni.pizza_09: 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

hawaiian_person123: I LOVE YOU MORT 🖤🖤🖤

Annapolis.valley: putain, de tous les endroits où il doit être ici(****, of all the places he have to be here)

MortLover:私の夫 🖤🖤🖤(my husband 🖤🖤🖤)

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Comments seems to flood in the comment section as he walks out of an alleyway, if you were watching or in the area, you can hear a police car siren in the background.

"Welp, look's like we have to run for it again, guys." He winked mischievously at the camera and quickly turns back to run in the other direction only to face a dead end, still holding the tripod, pointing the camera at him.

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apple.pizza: Welp- He's f*cked now😃

Di333333: I hope the police catch this criminal!🔪🔪🔪

Penni: NOOOO!!!

DarkDracula: Well, this is the most interesting thing I've seen in my life so far

Bobbie<3: Hi, what did I miss?

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"Sh*t... Well, no other way, I guess." He said as he quickly jumps on top of a garbage can and start to mario his way up the ally building walls.

"Hey! Stop there!" shouts a police man at Mort and points his gun at Mort mario'ing up the alley building walls.

He fires his gun but barely hits him, only for a slight cut to appear in Mort's side stomach, which was barely visible if only it didn't began to bleed, but despite that Mort seems unbothered, only clicking his tongue like it's just a prick of a needle. Other police officers arrived too, and some other goes inside the building to catch Mort there. A police then shot towards Mort, as it hit Mort in the stomach.

Mort groans in pain as he stops at a window and forcefully opens the window by punching it, making it shatter everywhere with his hands bleeding.

He enters the window and finds a woman in her pajamas almost like those of a whore, almost. As the woman noticed him she responded immediately with a scream in high pitch, almost beating those opera singers.

"Shut up" He rolls his eyes in annoyance and takes the knife he has in his waist and slash the womans throat, he then slips through the door and exits his way there.

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hagkstw(the author is too lazy to come up with names): Wow, our god doesn't even spare a beautiful woman in her pajamas a glance or chance.

jahsgy: Hahaha, Katso sinua nyt, tämän ansaitset koko tämän ajan!( Look at you now, this is what you deserve all this time!)

정형이🏆: 날 실망시키지마!(Don't let me down, Mort)

Khatabs: Dope

jahgs: Dang, if only I was that handsome.

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"Woah, it's already 3 billion. Thanks, guys." Mort smiles gratefully despite the dreadful situation.

As he was about to exit in the backdoor of the building, he was pointed by blinding lights which he responded by blocking his eyes from the direction it came from.

Suddenly, he felt something painful hit his head for a split second before it went dark. He feels himself drowning in something...a jello-like surrounding, kind of like the feeling of dizziness and drowning all together in a sort of jelly-like liquid.

It's hard to explain, but it's what you feel when you suddenly stands up and became dizzy. Imagine that being a massage chair, and that you sit on it. That's what it feels like.

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As he opens his eyes, he feels his body being carried by a giant man. He can't see the face clearly, as everything is blurry.

He hear someone say something in a language he isn't familiar with, yet he can somehow understand it.

"Father, what are we going to do with this poor child?" ask a woman's voice in concern to what he assumes is a priest.

"Since the goddess has entrusted him to us, we shall take the responsibility and raise him to be a respectful and helpful boy." answered the priest to the woman.

'What bullsh*t is these guys saying? Me? Good boy? Mort, the most wanted criminal for the past 8 years escaping the prison hundreds of times, to be a good boy? And why is it all blurry and big? Why can I understand them? If I remember correctly I only understand Mandarin, English, Russian, Japanese, French, Latin fluently while a few more just a bit and clearly this language doesn't even sound familiar at all. Is it even from earth?' Mort thought before a screen that wasn't blurry like everything else appeared in front of his eyes. He hears a mechanical woman's voice resounded.

[ System has been connected to a new host ]

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TO BE CONTINUED

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