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MMORPG: Visceral Online

Author: Jeffery_XXVI
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What does revenge mean? Harvey crushed the man's finger with his boot, relishing in the satisfaction of his agonizing scream. What does revenge mean? Walking towards the man writhing in pain, Harvey delivered a forceful kick to his ribs as desperate pleas for help escaped him. This is revenge. ... Harvey Laurier and numerous players, once immersed in the virtual world of Visceral Online, found themselves inexplicably trapped with no means of escape. How was such a phenomenon possible? In a fantasy realm filled with dragons, monsters, cursed weapons, and kingdoms—a dream for many gamers—an emerging faction within the game transformed this dream into a chilling nightmare. Players capable of challenging their dominance are targeted before they can reach their full potential, with Harvey finding himself in their crosshairs. However, in the midst of his battle against the faction, his girlfriend becomes a casualty, losing her life in the process. For many, such an event would be traumatizing, but for Harvey, it shattered something. A loosely held chord within him snapped, and he made a solemn vow upon her corpse. "I'll kill every single one of them with my own hands, regardless of what I have to sacrifice to do so.” Additional tags No edge lord(synopsis is exaggerated) World building Vengeance Fantasy Trapped Mystery.

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Chapter 10. Restart

I don't know if there's anyone actually still reading this, or is excited for this. But I'll be restarting Visceral Online, with the same characters and themes, but removing the first two arcs, and the convuluted manifest system for the main character, that made me even stop the story in the first place.

So that'll be it, the same characters, the same struggles. But everything would just get introduced more seamlessly, and I'll be revamping the world and the villain group, adding more struggles than just 'fighting' which I believed was a bad part of the work.

That being said, I hope to see you when it's all done, though that might take a while. Bye bye!👋

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(Note: I'm creating this short review as of Chapter 17) I haven't read many new books in WN (mostly just catching up to others like CO) but the one time I decided to randomly read a book I found this masterpiece. It's a revenge story and one that is really good. I've read over 1.1k books and this is by far THE BEST revenge story I've ever read. Fantastic Job Author continue making more of this cuz I'm definitely gonna be reading. (tldr: Plz don't make this premium early on I don't got money T-T)

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Book is really good, fights are well written. However it's too early to say for now, I like the main character alot. So if you want a revenge type story, this is a good read.

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Jeffery_XXVI
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Shameless Author here with a 5-star review. while I’m fully aware my book isn’t perfect. I still think there’s a myriad of pretty good qualities and I hope you all can see that too one day. The overarching and complete plot of the book has already been laid out but how I get there can still be influenced by the readers, With this book, I tried doing something different, creating a unique power system so each fight would feel intriguing and different it's hard to know if I succeeded at that so please be sure to drop a comment. I believe my characters are well written and well fleshed out, I’ll use some tropes here and there but I mostly want my characters to feel like humans you can see in the real world, with decisions anyone could get behind. But still, it's a novel hence exaggeration. I’ve always prided myself on writing good villains, so this will be another time to show it. The Hunting Dogs faction are the main villains of the book however there might be someone behind them, looming in the night like a red moon. My action scenes could be better and so could my dialogue so I hope I get better as you all read and maybe I’ll see a comment that says. “The author is actually improving.” And I’ll smile for the entire day. However, until then, I hope you have fun with this small creation of mine and hopefully one day it won't be so small anymore.

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