I'm not good at writing reviews, every work looks.good to me. But I have to say the writing in this totally pulled me into the story and enjoyed the story development. ** hoping laoshu is really hot... I like hot and evil chicks 🤣🤣 just some unreal preference. I recommend this story to everybody that stopped by here after reading synopsis... Just go for it 🤗🤗
As of currently, there is four chapters to this story. This is for a 'review for a review'. Be warned, I do long reviews. To start off the bat, I do enjoy the more hardy, more stern MC. It is still a bit early on but I do hope to see what sorts of developments the author will make with this woman. Not only that but I do want to see more development in the world itself. From the few cultivation stories I've read, I'm invested a bit to see where this story grows and how the author will make it stand out from the crowd. My main critique is that the writing is more so "telling" rather than "showing". I feel as though this story would benefit from having the plot be told in a more descriptive sense rather than it feeling like a re-telling of events. Don't be afraid to describe more of what the world looks like, what the main character feels, what they see from others. Rather than have it straight to the point, take your time to reveal what happens next. Do note that this story is a bit too early in development to make any solid opinions. However, the lead up so far is solid and it'll be interesting to see where the author will take the plot. I will admit, cultivation stories aren't my cup of tea. So take what you will with this review. Best of luck to you dear author.
Read the synopsis, it caught my interest, Read 4 chapters.. I can say that novel is pretty good till now. waiting for more. Story line is very interesting.. The characters development and the background is also good...it keeps you engrossed. I am going to continue reading it. Author..plz continue with the updates.. and do not leave the book in between.
As much as I want to make a detailed review, there’s only a few chapters available. Based on the synopsis, it was already enough to hook me in! The writing quality is great so far and I don’t think I’ve seen any errors. Additionally, the chapters released so far seem to have potential to be a great book. Kudos to the author for their hard work! :)
The story is good and I like it. It's neither fast nor slow. You did well in laying down what the main lead's personality was. And the white lotus and ex-fiance, were a nice touch. I already hate the two already hahaha. Although I do wish, I mean for me, I wish there could be more description of their appearances, behaviors or actions? To make it easier or vividly picture the female lead in my mind. To imagine the scene. Aside from that, the flow is also good. Good work and continue writing more!