Review Detail of SharpJester in Mistress of Domination- Night King's Pampered Wife

As of currently, there is four chapters to this story. This is for a 'review for a review'. Be warned, I do long reviews. To start off the bat, I do enjoy the more hardy, more stern MC. It is still a bit early on but I do hope to see what sorts of developments the author will make with this woman. Not only that but I do want to see more development in the world itself. From the few cultivation stories I've read, I'm invested a bit to see where this story grows and how the author will make it stand out from the crowd. My main critique is that the writing is more so "telling" rather than "showing". I feel as though this story would benefit from having the plot be told in a more descriptive sense rather than it feeling like a re-telling of events. Don't be afraid to describe more of what the world looks like, what the main character feels, what they see from others. Rather than have it straight to the point, take your time to reveal what happens next. Do note that this story is a bit too early in development to make any solid opinions. However, the lead up so far is solid and it'll be interesting to see where the author will take the plot. I will admit, cultivation stories aren't my cup of tea. So take what you will with this review. Best of luck to you dear author.