The story has a good concept but it’s hard to appreciate due to the poor grammar. If you got an editor or used grammarly this would be a 5/5 for me so keep up with the good work and try to edit more! 👍
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Hello Mr. Author, I hope that your writing will improve with this one. Although I didn't think there was much wrong with the ff, it was as cheesy as the show. Anyhow, hope for more chapters!
Good story and good setting. World building is good, has a lot of potential, but the Author went missing so there will be no updates anymore (I think so at least)
this was really good if there was more chapters I would be a devoted reader. this was a new take on fantasy for me but it didn't matter its good but MORE CHAPTERS. ong 😭 I need more 😩