Reviews of Marvelous me in Marvel

i like it so far and it's really interesting but i don't get one thing, why give him Super powers just to make him use a suit like Iron man???

You say that your English is bad but it looks pretty good to me and im enjoying your story very well . just release some of them chapters bro

It’s really bad, the way the sentence are structured Make it hard to read and the characters are all one demential. The descriptions leave a lot to be desired, over all its bad.

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Really good. Good chapter. Good story. Please keep updating.Really good. Good chapter. Good story. Please keep updating.Really good. Good chapter. Good story. Please keep updating.Really good. Good chapter. Good story. Please keep updating.

This is a really good chapter. And a really good story. The Main Character is good and his powers are developing. Please keep updating.-------------------

Really good. Please continue.Really good. Please continue.Really good. Please continue.Really good. Please continue.Really good. Please continue.Really good. Please continue.Really good. Please continue.Really good. Please continue.Really good. Please continue.Really good. Please continue.

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Only thing I am angry about is there are less chapter. The chapters are long enough . Hope it will restart again.🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡 I really want more.

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This is a really interesting story bit it's in need of a rewrite. I would recommend you get a beta reader/ editor to help with your grammar and sentence structure.

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