JazzBerryJam
I like the different types of magic. . . Not just focused on elements like fire, water, electric, ice. . . There are also illusions. . . Time-bending. . . Teleportation. . . There are also witches and sorcerers but it's totally different from Harry Potter. . . More updates, please. . . Thank you, author. . .
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Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. β¨I read your book and by far itβs one of the greatest works Iβve read here on Wattpad. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. π You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you donβt have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Hey, sweets! JazzBerryJam here! Shameless review from moi. :) I've written a fantasy novel before, and a BL story too, but a BL-Fantasy book? That's quite a challenge, especially it's in English. (Most stories I've written are in my native language.) I'm really looking forward to all of your remarks (and gifts, please!) on this novel. All are welcome, so please don't be shy! I know there are silent readers here who are keeping their thoughts to themselves. Don't worry, sweets! I got you! ^_^ Thanks a lot, all! :3
Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! π
I AM ALREADY IN LOVE WITH FEI!!!! Trick is also a cool character, seems confused about all the magic stuff but that's because he's new to it. I can tell he will be a great sorcerer someday! I am excited what's gonna happen to all of them omgggggg [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]