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Okay...So I did a quick read on your first chapter. I really love your vocabulary first of all, you have an open mind when it comes to choosing the right word and it's a great trait to have when writing. However, your grammar could do some work, It's not bad, more like up to scratch, but you could do better in this field. And your story plot is intriguing so I'll give you that, definitely gonna continue this later 👀 Your title is interesting, and that's a plus point which attracts the eye of the reader. Overall, it's pretty good, could do some work here and there but definitely worth giving a try.
This book is amazing and story plot is very interesting too. The book name brings me here coz I found it very interesting and unique. After reading few more chapters it started to become interesting and description about surroundings etc. Make this story more beautiful to read. Every one should try this amazing book. I am excited to read more.
I just read the first chapter and I was pulled into an entirely different world, a place from which I dont wanna escape anytime soon~~ The plot is amazing and smartly written!! Cant wait to dive further into the character's world. GREAT GOING AUTHOR NIM YAYYYYYY~~ALL THE BESTT TO YOUU>> FIGHTING!!!(۶•̀ᴗ•́)۶(۶•̀ᴗ•́)۶
This book is really amazing🔥. It is written in simple language and in a very beautiful way that everyone can understand. I can imagine all the scenarios well and there won't be any confusion in the story while reading. The story is really addicting that I wait everyday eagerly to read it. I would recommend everyone to read it. All the best author- nim❤