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Reviews of Mafia's Vampire Girl

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Mafia's Vampire Girl

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Bookworm_luvislife
Bookworm_luvislifeLv4Bookworm_luvislife

Hey, taetae! I have read first few chapters and trust me you won't regret reading and adding this story to your library! And for author, You did a very good job there, I see alot of potential in the story! ALL THE BEST! HWAITING!

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Raina_Kim1890
Raina_Kim1890Lv1Raina_Kim1890

I read the first chapter just now, and I can swear that I'm getting interested in reading further already. Your vocabulary and writing skills are amazing u nice keep going...

_oreobun_
_oreobun_Lv1_oreobun_

I really loved your book !!!!! It's really good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ You're doing a really good job ❤️❤️❤️❤️ Hope you will keep writing❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Keep it up 👍

Fathimath_Faiherr
Fathimath_FaiherrLv1Fathimath_Faiherr

I loved it. It keeps you on the edge of your seats and enthusiasm increases as you keep reading

armyshope_
armyshope_Lv1armyshope_

Okay...So I did a quick read on your first chapter. I really love your vocabulary first of all, you have an open mind when it comes to choosing the right word and it's a great trait to have when writing. However, your grammar could do some work, It's not bad, more like up to scratch, but you could do better in this field. And your story plot is intriguing so I'll give you that, definitely gonna continue this later 👀 Your title is interesting, and that's a plus point which attracts the eye of the reader. Overall, it's pretty good, could do some work here and there but definitely worth giving a try.

Dark_Scholars
Dark_ScholarsLv13Dark_Scholars

Wow....You really did a nice job🤔 There was something realistic about it even though vampires are not real. perhaps it is your detailing, the characters are designed. The paragraphs are a bit long but it is not a big deal. kudos

Raya_Drake
Raya_DrakeLv1Raya_Drake

Read a few chapters and i have to say I really love this book, the concept and the characters are great, the grammar is really good, easy to read, nicely done.

Delani_Kupusamy
Delani_KupusamyLv1Delani_Kupusamy

Omg- i read the first half of the book and its amazing truly. Author has a great sense of writing. Overall i know this is an amazing book at first sight

Kim_Aira_
Kim_Aira_AuthorKim_Aira_

I am in love with my own book and I am curious to know what the plot will be... Ideas comes up suddenly so even I have no idea. 😌 I hope you all will continue to support.

Daoist0Zy3Lu
Daoist0Zy3LuLv1Daoist0Zy3Lu

I thoroughly enjoyed the book! The characters were developed at a good pace, the book was extremely engaging and never made me feel bored! I am a fan of their writing and description!

Jiah_
Jiah_Lv1Jiah_

I read the first chapter just now, and I can swear that I'm getting interested in reading further already. Your vocabulary and writing skills are amazing. Keep up the good work hehe <3

Taehyung_Kim_2487
Taehyung_Kim_2487Lv1Taehyung_Kim_2487

This book is amazing and story plot is very interesting too. The book name brings me here coz I found it very interesting and unique. After reading few more chapters it started to become interesting and description about surroundings etc. Make this story more beautiful to read. Every one should try this amazing book. I am excited to read more.

Ria_Sanal
Ria_SanalLv1Ria_Sanal

It's an amazing book.💜 And I love it. So much♥️ Thank you author nim writing this amazing book.🥰 Story and plot everything is interesting. And it make me read more and more. I am waiting for more chapters. ♥️💜

Pakhi_is
Pakhi_isLv1Pakhi_is

Its really a professional work. I love it so much. I can imagine it well inside my head. Writing quality is amazing. The way how author explains by using such good vocabulary. Its amazing work, really! <3

Raja_resmi
Raja_resmiLv1Raja_resmi

The story is very nice and bright. It can capture the reader's intrest in a few minutes. The story plot is mystery and can keep the reader's captivated. The writing is simple and elegant. Keep going!!❤️❤️❤️

Iamasuperstar30
Iamasuperstar30Lv1Iamasuperstar30

I just read the first chapter and I was pulled into an entirely different world, a place from which I dont wanna escape anytime soon~~ The plot is amazing and smartly written!! Cant wait to dive further into the character's world. GREAT GOING AUTHOR NIM YAYYYYYY~~ALL THE BESTT TO YOUU>> FIGHTING!!!(۶•̀ᴗ•́)۶(۶•̀ᴗ•́)۶

Daoist91XJez
Daoist91XJezLv1Daoist91XJez

OMG!!!!!!! This book is awesome I love this story very much it's really good💓💓 I love the way how you write and describe everything! And it is quiet easy to understand

bee_06
bee_06Lv1bee_06

This book is really amazing🔥. It is written in simple language and in a very beautiful way that everyone can understand. I can imagine all the scenarios well and there won't be any confusion in the story while reading. The story is really addicting that I wait everyday eagerly to read it. I would recommend everyone to read it. All the best author- nim❤

kook_Tae
kook_TaeLv1kook_Tae

I love this story very much it's really good *thumbs up* try this and I'm sure you'll love it too *smiles and nods nods* soo...GIVE IT A TRY!

BAISU_LAHIRI
BAISU_LAHIRILv1BAISU_LAHIRI

OMO this book is so good and beautifully written by author nim. Detail and emotion and plot everything is on the point. I can feel the character well. I hope I can read it more to know main character. Overall this is an amazing book so everyone should try it. 💜 All the best author nim. Fighting!!!