great start author

Read a few chapters and i have to say I really love this book, the concept and the characters are great, the grammar is really good, easy to read, nicely done.

really cool beginning

Great rewrite i love this concept, i would love to read more to see where the sort takes the girl, great characters and description. Keep updating looks like this will be another good story,

i will

This is a good book, i love the book cover that's one of the reason i found it and your story outline is great and so is the plot, it is one to read. Keep up the good work author.

This book has a lot of potential, i love the characters, the plot is great, yes it has a few mistakes but that does not matter because it is a great story and i recommend your book. Kudos to the author and keep up the good wrk.