Reviews of LOVE MY DADDY

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Utterly horrible English. Characters change gender at a whim, story doesn't flow. random emojis are used. could be a great story. does not do world building well.

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After re sending the chapters will you be adding to the story as well or just re doing the chapters?

needed a story with this concept I can get behind it . . . . . . .

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Writing quality: 4/5 star [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.